After a twister transports a lonely Kansas farm girl to a magical land, she sets out on a dangerous journey to find a wizard with the powers to send her home.

by Roberto Alto 671 pts

6 reviews

Foxtrot25 17,380 pts ★ Accepted

I don't think back then they said twister much. Replace it with tornado, perhaps? She really isn't that lonely, she has her dog, maybe work that in instead?

dpg 112,231 pts

Yes she wants to return home -- to the safety ?of the familiar. ?Oz is a more hostile, dangerous world than Kansas ?(tornadoes excepted). The "lesson learned" is that she comes to appreciate that home. ?She doesn't just need to return to Kansas ?to be safe -- she wants to return to Kansas to be with the people she loves.

DanielSturman 279 pts

There's a motivation problem in Wizard of Oz. She wants to go home the moment from the moment she gets there, yet 'theirs no place like home' is the moral?

Neer Shelter 55,464 pts

Good logline. Perhaps would be best to mention the wicked witch of the west?

After a tornado transports a Kansas girl to a magical land, she must defeat a wicked witch on her journey to find a wizard with the powers to send her home.