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Penpusher · 38 points

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Penpusher

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Revised: Desperate to prove himself worthy of his civil rights activist wife, whom he crippled in an accident, George obsesses about the JFK promise, turning into a delusional quest to prevent assassination.

June 27, 2026
Over three decades, Lucy passes through innocence, violent delusion, tenderness, and ultimately grace – fractured versions of a soul struggling to survive a world that continually misreads her.

June 22, 2026
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After an accident cripples the woman he loves, a guilt-ridden young man takes on America’s scars as his own, risking everything to change the course of history and earn the love she freely gives.

June 22, 2026
Convinced that he murdered a priest he caught abusing a child, Henry fractured into two warring personalities, until the insights of his illness help him bring down a dangerous child-trafficking network.

June 18, 2026

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on To pay off his debts, a former boxer addicted to gambling is coerced by his loan shark into carrying out an attack against a famous footballer just months before the World Cup.

It's a good story but familiar. Can you incorporate a fresh angle?
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Put the answer or at least the conflict in the logline.
on Logline: After killing each other in a muddy ravine on Guadalcanal, a Japanese soldier and an American Marine awaken as unwillingly tethered ghosts and spend decades protecting the grandson born from their families’ impossible union—bickering across wars, cultures, and generations as they search for redemption and peace. Genre: Primary: Historical Fantasy Drama Secondary: War Drama / Supernatural Family Saga

Fascinating idea. The execution will be difficult. Good luck with it.
on “You can plan a wedding, a career, a thousand tomorrows… but peace? Peace just finds you when you finally stop planning.”

This is a good premise, but it needs character and action.