10 reviews
I like the story. I would pinpoint a struggle.
This might work as a comedy. Is the majority of the story about him trying to get arrested again or is it set in jail about him trying to re establish his jail wrestling event?
This sounds like a comedy to me. One I would enjoy! But you said "drama", sooooo... I see from your comments that maybe you're not clear on the tone of it? It's point?A straight to point B. Had limelight, wants it, commits a crime to go back to jail. Where's the MOVIE? What's act 2? I mean, it's not hard to commit a crime, you just do it. So like... what's the struggle? What's the EMOTIONAL struggle?