When wakeboarding is announced as an Olympic sport, a gold medal hopeful seeks out training from her disgraced, former champion father.

Whirlybirds

3 reviews

dpg 112,231 pts

Yeah, it reads like a knock off of the tried and trite formula of a kid with a ?Big Dream who must reconcile with a parental figure in order to make his dream come true.

The only novel element is the sport, waterboarding. ?Is that a strong enough to generate interest? ?I dunno.

Karel Segers Mentor · 5,093 pts

VERY cliche except that it's with wake boarding. Is there nothing else that attracts you to the story -- or anything you can do to change it up -- because you should add it. As a logline it's fine, as I said just very flat. Hope this helps.

Former member 20 pts

VERY cliche except that it's with wake boarding. Is there nothing else that attracts you to the story -- or anything you can do to change it up -- because you should add it. As a logline it's fine, as I said just very flat. Hope this helps.