When during a famine a loving Eskimo grandmother is abandoned by her migrating family, she reflects on her past life and faces inevitable death.

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Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

Agreed with Richiev and DPG, reflecting on its own is not an action fit for a film, the MC needs to pursue a specific outer goal.
Could the grandmother want to break with tradition and fight for survival on her own?

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

As Richiev said. ?What's the plot that arises from this situation? ?Not just a string of pearls, a series of random recollections in the form of flashbacks, but a causally concatenated sequence of events with rising tension that builds to a crisis, climax and resolution.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

This would be the set-up. The story would be the compelling flashbacks. What story are you trying to tell with the flashbacks?