When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.

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Pazzazz Penpusher · 131 pts

I just want to say that I have learnt so much from all your reviews.? I am happy to submit this log line to the next part of my project of writing a screenplay for my feature film. This has been an excellent opportunity to do this. Thank you all again for your time and professional experience.??Bye for now!

After a mental breakdown a young Maori corporate?leaves the wealth and returns home to the land of his spiritual roots, to re-discover that he must never abandon his cultural identity. ?

Pazzazz Penpusher · 131 pts

Thank you for your response. I will make that change.

Foxtrot25 Summitry · 17,380 pts

Pazz,

Avoid mentioning your protagonist by name unless he/she is a historical figure. You need to briefly describe instead.

After a mental breakdown, a _____? abandons his fortune in order to return home to the land of his spiritual roots.