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Logliner · 131 points

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A young corporate suffers a breakdown that links him to a traditional religion that destroyed his culture. He must overcome an internal conflict and re-discover his spiritual faith so that his identity isn’t diminished forever.

October 8, 2023
When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.

September 30, 2017
One man’s limitations of faith is challenged when his career, church and whakawhanaungatanga diminishes his true identity. He must awaken his spiritual connection through Christianity.

November 14, 2016

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on When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.

I just want to say that I have learnt so much from all your reviews.? I am happy to submit this log line to the next part of my project of writing a screenplay for my feature film. This has…
on When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.

Thank you for your response. I will make that change.
on When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.

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on When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.

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on When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.

Hi allI think I have gone in and noticed a bad habit of what I have not been doing. That is being specific with my descriptions. I have to admit I was challenged and struggling. So I hope I am…
on When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.

Hi Craig. Thank you for your response. Whanagungatanga means in our Maori culture, a close connection between people; kinship. This is a story about?internal conflict of Ti kanga Maori and Christianity and the discover of a true identity in God…
on One man’s limitations of faith is challenged when his career, church and whakawhanaungatanga diminishes his true identity. He must awaken his spiritual connection through Christianity.

Thanks for you review. I was concerned about that as well. I will go back and build it up again.