The dormant, youthful love of two hopeless romantics is suddenly ignited to life as they trade names to profess their love… and their identity.

Agreed with the above comments, this logline lacks some vital components.
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When two young?women head over heels in love trade?identities?in an effort to further their understanding of?one other, ?the dark side of each girl's family comes to light and threatens not only?the teens'?relationship but?also their lives.

I like what CraigDGriffiths said about digging for gold. ?With so many scripts to choose from and so little time, producers aren't going to dig to discover gold. ?The gold has to be right there, on the surface, visible in the logline.

And I have no idea what the "gold" is in this story, what makes it special, what makes it different from 10,001 scripts floating around Hollyweird about hopeless romantics.

A logline ?should reveal, not conceal. ?It needs to be specific. ?Who are the main characters? ?What is their objective goal? ?Who opposes them? ?What's at stake? ?What's the hook, the plus factor that makes this story different and compelling from others of the same genre?