Fma

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EVERYTHING I KNOW ABOUT WOODY ALLEN AND A FEW THINGS I MADE UP – A nebbish Indian boy convinced he’s telepathically linked to Woody Allen learns critical life lessons from colorful characters when he embarks on an adventure to find Woody in NY

April 22, 2017
WHEN IS WINTER – After all clocks mysteriously stop and the stars begin moving randomly, a terminally ill U.S. President is elected to lead the earth out of the chaos thats growing in a world that can’t tell time.

April 20, 2017
YOKO – Based on true events – Told from Japanese artist Yoko Ono’s perspective – The story of how she and Megastar John Lennon fell in love in 1966 and the incredibly powerful forces that tried to tear them apart.

April 18, 2017
LAKSMHI SINGS THE BLUES – When a manic depressive New Yorker visiting India has an psychotic episode in Mumbai, she is involuntarily hospitalized in a lunatic asylum. Inside she meets an unlikely group who together battle their mental illnesses through the power of music and dance in this beautiful triumph of the human spirit story.

April 18, 2017
MY SKIN FLUTE ? A poor porn addicted musician sells his Down Syndrome baby on the spare parts black market for a new electric clarinet after he?s presented with a life changing opportunity. Now he must evade the irate mother and his haunting conscience while pursuing his dream of being the first clarinet playing rock star.

April 18, 2017
THE REAR NAKED CHOKE – After his older brother loses badly, the youngest son of a Brazilian Ju Jitsu legend must find a way to beat the undefeated champ of an underground tournament and restore the family’s honor. Problem is he’s a closet gay virgin dying for some dick, he’s got zero interest in fighting, and zero ability to hide his erection when “rolling” with his training partners.

April 16, 2017
WHO FEELS IT KNOWS IT – A couple of high schoolers spend their 4 days of Senior Trip to Jamaica looking for the ghost of Bob Marley.

April 15, 2017
ROCKY ROAD – An overweight weekend warrior basketball player gets a once in a lifetime chance to play Lebron James one-on-one in a bout in which he strives to hold his own for his self-respect.

April 15, 2017
UNRELATABLE – An academic teen prodigy with zero social skills hires the dumbest jock imaginable to teach him how to attract his crush in time for prom.

April 15, 2017
LOSING WAIT – After a weak willed fat woman’s fiance tells her she’s gotten too big and he heads for the hills, she enlists a personal trainer who’s actually an angel sent by God with one shot to help someone or he’s banished to hell.

April 15, 2017
MARILYN’S REVENGE – Hotel guests locked inside a swank historic Hollywood hotel fight to escape after an exploitative publicity stunt seance angers the ghost of Marilyn Monroe.

April 14, 2017
PERTH GIRLS ARE EASY – When a space alien is chosen by his people to go to where the beautiful humans are (LA) and mate with one, he miscalculates and lands in remote Perth, Australia. Now armed only with pop culture references and bourgie lines like “I’m a producer”, he must find and convince a down to earth Aussie girl to have a baby with him or he’ll return home alone and be executed.

April 10, 2017
MAKING WHOOPI – The unbelievable true and moving triumph of the human spirit story of how Caryn Elaine Johnson’s powerful relationship with her mother helped her survive the welfare system in 1950’s Manhattan, drug addiction, and a self inflicted abortion to reinvent herself into a world- reknowned Academy Award winning actress.

April 9, 2017
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STRANGER TO BLUE WATER – When the sheltered daughter of a disabled coal miner falls for a Trinidadian man passing through town on a sales call , she’s torn between staying in the rinky dead end pennsylvania borough caring for her crippled racist dad or leaving with her dark mysterious lover on an adventure in the Caribbean.

April 9, 2017
THE BEAST OF JAIPUR – When a lonely leper from the Untouchable class in modern day India ‘s only friend – a precocious 8 year old girl – is abducted by an evil supernatural figure and forced into sex slavery, he must overcome his debilitating disease and risk his life to rescue her.

March 30, 2017
LITTLE EIFFEL – The improbable true story of how Gustave Eiffel fought against massive protests, construction fatalities, and structural issues to build the most visited monument on earth – The Eiffel Tower

March 29, 2017
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FARTACUS ? An NC-17 bawdy adventure set in Ancient Rome: When a lowly slave is mistaken for aristocratic progeny he has one chance to outwits rivals, seduce virgin nobles, and con the Gods on his improbable road to becoming Caesar.

March 29, 2017
FARTACUS – An NC-17 bawdy adventure set in Ancient Rome: When a lowly slave is mistaken for aristocratic progeny he has one chance to outwits rivals, seduces virgin nobles, and cons the Gods on his improbable road to becoming Caesar.

March 29, 2017
BOY NAMED SOO – when an awkward Korean boy from an uncaring family is bullied mercilessly in school he turns to his alcoholic neighbor whose “get tough or die” mantra threatens to turn the impressionable young man into a mass murderer.

March 29, 2017
POOL PARTY – When the humiliating pranking of an overweight loser during a high school pep rally goes viral, he decides to face his insecurities and his bullies in 3 months at the annual summer pool party hosted by the most popular girl in school.

March 28, 2017

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