runawayrobin

Penpusher · 51 points

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The dormant, youthful love of two hopeless romantics is suddenly ignited to life as they trade names to profess their love… and their identity.

February 18, 2017

on Desperately trying to remember the events of his past , A man who suffers from Amnesia with superhuman powers crosses paths with a very strange life form that claims knowing of his past. However the governements of the world targets him and consider him as a danger.

Or at least edited to the point where it doesn't feel unneeded or shoehorned in
on Desperately trying to remember the events of his past , A man who suffers from Amnesia with superhuman powers crosses paths with a very strange life form that claims knowing of his past. However the governements of the world targets him and consider him as a danger.

On top of what the others said, I believe the last sentence could be omitted.