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Heartstrings

8 reviews

CraigDGriffiths Singularity · 20,463 pts ★ Accepted

To ?make his dying wife happy an ill-tempered has-been rock star enters a singing contest, which reignites his passion for performing. ?He must survive the competition and a judge determined to get him out to ?......

I hope this helps.

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

"...So I?m just going to write?scripts that connects to the essence of my being regardless of if it market potential."
"...if I wrote 20 or 10 scripts in my lifetime that connects to me and only 1 gets made, I?d have that...."

Considering your statements above posting on this website seems purely academic, so moving forward all I can do is hope you find your writing gratifying.

Reginald McGhee Penpusher · 61 pts

I'm not quite sure why a judge wants him convicted. I feel that the logline is a little bit loose. Does he have to come up with the money to finish the to-do list or come up with money to find a lawyer. ?I think those questions got me scratching a little bit. If only the logline was a little bit more concise, I wouldn't mind watching or reading this script.