Reginald McGhee

61 points

239 points to Logliner

Loglines

on Cross

I'm not quite sure why a judge wants him convicted. I feel that the logline is a little bit loose. Does he have to come up with the money to finish the to-do list or come up with money to…
on When disgraced banker gets a job working as a truck driver for his father and discovers the company?s cover-up of multiple road deaths, he must expose his father?s negligence before someone else dies.

When a disgraced --- is what you're looking for, not when disgraced. I think the logline is executed well. I just think the grammar is a little bit off. I would think the logline would go like this: A disgraced…