An examination of sexual relationships, in which three protagonists interact in different combinations.

7 reviews

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

If it's for an existing film put it in classics and title the film. And this still is too vague to tell the story, more of a vague premise - I posted an intertwining story logline recently and got some good feedback you should check it out.

Karel Segers Mentor · 5,093 pts

If it's for an existing film put it in classics and title the film. And this still is too vague to tell the story, more of a vague premise - I posted an intertwining story logline recently and got some good feedback you should check it out.

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

>>>This is the logline to a Godard movie.

?loge de l'amour (In Praise of Love)

Actually, it's a blurb, not a logline. ?Blurbs and loglines are targeted at different markets. ?A blurb is targeted at ?movie viewers. ?A logline is targeted at movie makers.

The primary function of a logline is to get a script read. ?However, if you are as well established and have the reputation of Godard, you don't need a logline to get your script read. ?If you're not established in the industry, then you do.

And loglines for movies should be posted under "Classics".

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

This logline lacks a main character description, however if it's an ensemble there needs to be a good reason for the multi protagonists that is justified in the plot.

Other wise as Richieve wrote: What is the conflict?

Who wants what and why?

wedoitlive Penpusher · 176 pts

This is the logline to a Godard movie.

CraigDGriffiths Singularity · 20,463 pts

So what is the outcomes, what does that drive in the story.

Three people enter into sex experiments but it leads to feelings and actions not part of the testing.