A young writer tries to accurately research her novel by getting pregnant and having an abortion, only to find out that she is infertile.

3 reviews

Absinthe Head Penpusher · 46 pts

I almost wish the ending did not give away the character's journey's end...

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

Agreed with DPG.

I'll add that I'm not clear on how she can get pregnant and be infertile, the logic here doesn't work.

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

End of story.

Or is it the beginning?? And if so, what does she do now?? ?What becomes her objective goal?? ? The logline sets up a situation for a plot -- but doesn't follow through with a plot.

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