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Christ living a normal life as a normal dude decides to defend himself against a brutal police force bringing him face to face with his estranged daughter who is trying to kill him.

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Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

In order for Christ to be Christ, he needs to sacrifice himself and get resurrected. From your logline, it sounds like your Christ skipped the major shenanigans in the new testament and went on to live a normal life, and if that's the case, it's just a story about a guy trying to avoid being killed by his daughter.

Other than that, the plot is unclear and the premise confusing.
What is his goal? What does he need to achieve as a result of the threat from his daughter? And what does "...bringing him face to face with his estranged daughter..." mean? Do they come up to him on the street with her in custody and show them to each other? Is she a part of the police force and is leading them to catch him? Why would the police be after him in the first place? Why does she want to kill her own father? Is it because they became estranged?

No need to answer the above questions in a direct reply. These are only a few of the questions the logline raises and likely will confuse most people.