A martriarch fights to keep her family together amid hurtful secrets.

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Hey, nice work. I have two questions; 1) What happens if her family falls apart? I know it would be sad but that might not be enough. 2) Can you give us a descriptive word about the mother? I personally jumped to thinking about my mum because she is the matriarch in my family but that's not really what you want, you want us thinking about THIS woman and what she might do. Keep it up!