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I guess because I have been told to pattern after Netflix loglines, I didn't think of specificity. I've been told concise and to the point.
To answer your first three questions, all of those things happen to him in the film. I have been told to get it concise and seems add all of those details will make it longer.
I really like your example. lol thank you for the advice and I will work on improving it.