sabrown

41 points

259 points to Logliner

4 loglines
12 reviews

Loglines

On the day he vows to quit, a burned out psychiatrist breaks confidentiality and reveals the intriguing, mysterious, and dramatic lives of his patients.

August 1, 2022
Four friends must stop a blackmailer with evidence of a death they covered up.

January 13, 2021
A martriarch fights to keep her family together amid hurtful secrets.

January 13, 2021
A young man must find the reason behind his promiscuity before it destroys him.

January 13, 2021

Recent reviews

on A young couple discovers a mysterious toy box that kills anyone who makes a wish.

I really like this premise but isn't there a movie like this called the Box? Or maybe Hellraiser?
on A ruthlessly funny social media maven stoops to manipulating her boss’ friends and family online. But when she falls for his idealistic son, she must fight to buy back her soul.

I like the premise but I wonder what you mean by punching and buy back her soul.
on A young man must find the reason behind his promiscuity before it destroys him.

I guess because I have been told to pattern after Netflix loglines, I didn't think of specificity. I've been told concise and to the point.
on A young man must find the reason behind his promiscuity before it destroys him.

To answer your first three questions, all of those things happen to him in the film. I have been told to get it concise and seems add all of those details will make it longer.
on A young man must find the reason behind his promiscuity before it destroys him.

I really like your example. lol thank you for the advice and I will work on improving it.
on A martriarch fights to keep her family together amid hurtful secrets.

Thanks for the feedback. I will consider everything and come back stronger.
on A martriarch fights to keep her family together amid hurtful secrets.

Thank you for that feedback.
on A high-end thief must execute an impossible heist to prove she didn’t murder her entire team before her crime boss father hunts her down.

I like it. I love the intrigue and the fact that it's her father really got my attention.
on When a mysterious TV show hits the airwaves, two young women must race against time to stop a killer from the show from invading their house.

Why is the show mysterious? I don't quite understand. Do they watch this show and that is how they recognize the killer? Not quite sure I get the concept.
on When a seemingly crazy man claims to be his wife’s rightful husband, a troubled counselor must must act like the seemingly crazy man if he’s to save his collapsing marriage.”

I am confused but this logline. Also, I would not use "crazy" but mentally ill. Just to be PC.
on After robbing a casino in Vegas, a pair of stubborn biracial twin arrive in New York to start a new life, they discover the trouble they left in Vegas, didn’t stay in Vegas.

I like it!!!! I was immediately intrigued and wanted to know what trouble followed them from Vegas.
on A pioneering immunologist fights a losing battle against AIDS racing to find a cure before it kills millions while trying to save his family.

Hello. Just wondering if people are still having a rampant problem with HIV with the use of the meds nowadays. Just curious, what is he saving his family from?