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What are the stakes? Why is it important she they don't trade personal details? This is the centerpiece of? your plot, why is it such a bad thing that they start to get to know each other?
Not sure what the story is from the logline - Das ist nicht gut!
What does she want as a result of the bond? A relationship? If so what kind (she can't possibly be in love after one night)? What does she do to get what she wants? These are the most important pieces of information a logline should contain but are missing in this version.