When Nazi Germany blitz his beloved Poland, a patriotic farm boy is dragooned into the Wehrmacht to save his family. The Sturm und Drang to survive hell takes him far form home and God.

False Flags

9 reviews

WARRIN88 Penpusher · 24 pts

Love this concept, gives ample opportunity for deep rooted conflict and also the opportunity to tell the side of the Wehrmacht soldiers, which is extremely rarely done (Generation War is the only example I can think of).

Fred Wohlert Penpusher · 1 pts

Well, the link is correct and active. Of course the script is written. For now I forward the script only to possible buyers. The definite title is SWASTIKA. Have a look at http://fjwohlert.wix.com/swastika

kjk11 0 pts

I couldn't find anything. My email kjkorberg@gmail.com

Fred Wohlert Penpusher · 1 pts

Yes, good suggestion it could be the title as well. Dragooned is chosen because of its appropriate double meaning of "coerced/forced" and "a mounted infantryman armed with a carbine." His struggle, "Sturm und Drang", is evident. He is a Pole who has to fight along with his German oppressor. His goal is stated in "to survive hell."

Thank you Kerry for your comment. More on the script can be found here:

http://false-flags0.webnode.com/

kjk11 0 pts

Is the script written yet? I would like to read it.

kjk11 0 pts

It would make a very cool title and maybe make the logline clearer if it was substituted for in there. Although your use of "dragooned" is correct for me I have only known dragoon as a term for a soldier, maybe "pressed" would be better. Sp. form - from. Maybe a hint of his ultimate goal and what his struggles are.

With respect

Kerry

Fred Wohlert Penpusher · 1 pts

Literally storm and stress. Disquiet, ferment, fermentation, restiveness, restlessness, unrest, turmoil, uneasiness, unquietness.

I found Sturm und Drang the ideal definition. It has a German origin in the English language and expresses the constant battle of feelings and changes the protagonist is undergoing.

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

Why would the boy be "dragooned" into the Wehrmacht when the Nazis considered Poles to be racially inferior?

And what makes this story different, unique from the 100,002 other movie scripts that have already been written set in World War 2?