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When Nazi Germany blitz his beloved Poland, a patriotic farm boy is dragooned into the Wehrmacht to save his family. The Sturm und Drang to survive hell takes him far form home and God.
I couldn't find anything. My email kjkorberg@gmail.com
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A middleaged Canadian in LA, fights for his life when he is caught up in the 1990’s coastal rap war after a chance meeting with a legedary rapstar.
thanks for all the input particularly the title suggestion. Back to the drawing board.
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When Nazi Germany blitz his beloved Poland, a patriotic farm boy is dragooned into the Wehrmacht to save his family. The Sturm und Drang to survive hell takes him far form home and God.
Is the script written yet? I would like to read it.
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When Nazi Germany blitz his beloved Poland, a patriotic farm boy is dragooned into the Wehrmacht to save his family. The Sturm und Drang to survive hell takes him far form home and God.
It would make a very cool title and maybe make the logline clearer if it was substituted for in there. Although your use of "dragooned" is correct for me I have only known dragoon as a term for a soldier,…
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A middleaged Canadian in LA, fights for his life when he is caught up in the 1990’s coastal rap war after a chance meeting with a legedary rapstar.
The white Canadian fortyish male who's ex has moved to LA, so kind of a "Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court" character but as your comments imply I am struggling to impart that. Any ideas. Thank-you very much for your…
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"Set in a futuristic world where humans are controlled by their fascist government, a career criminal gets drawn into a deadly plot when he rescues a upper class woman from the secret police and has to depend on her to survive."
Goes without saying that a fascist government is in control. "a upper" should be an upper. Need some detail on deadly plot and ultimate goal.
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Filming the next big teenage vampire movie, an actress suffering from low self esteem is hunted by a animatronic doll bought to life with experimental A.I.
Wat's A.I.?
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A father / son mortician team try to uncover the cause of death on a Jane Doe. The more they uncover, the more mysterious and terrifying their world becomes.
A father and son mortician team are forced into a terrifying and mysterious world when they try to solve a Jane Doe case. Just a shorter and idea. Kerry, All the best
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When Nazi Germany blitz his beloved Poland, a patriotic farm boy is dragooned into the Wehrmacht to save his family. The Sturm und Drang to survive hell takes him far form home and God.
What is sturm and drang?
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Faced with the prospect of being forced into early retirement, a tough female detective agrees to one last big case. Her commitment to the force is questioned when she starts to fall in love with her mark.
Shouldn't be "a last big case" if she's trying to avoid early retirement. Also "mark" suggests sucker, maybe suspect or perp would be better. Just some thoughts. Kerry
