WARRIN88

Penpusher · 24 points

276 points to Logliner

on An American pilot, running from his abusive father, signs up to fight for the Royal Air Force during the Battle of Britain.

Ah yes, I think it needs it. Will thrash out this concept some more! Thank you!
on When an autistic priest is locked up in an insane asylum he must convince his psychiatrist that God is real.

I think this logline would benefit from suggesting why/what stakes are involved in convincing the psychiatrist.
on When Nazi Germany blitz his beloved Poland, a patriotic farm boy is dragooned into the Wehrmacht to save his family. The Sturm und Drang to survive hell takes him far form home and God.

Love this concept, gives ample opportunity for deep rooted conflict and also the opportunity to tell the side of the Wehrmacht soldiers, which is extremely rarely done (Generation War is the only example I can think of).