Fred Wohlert

As much as we must strive to make perfect loglines . The bottom line is connecting with the industry until someone sees its potential. And it's no secret that is the biggest hurdle for any unproduced writer. http://whatculture.com/film/anatomy-of-a-masterpiece-roman-polanskis-the-pianist.php

Yes, the industry prefers strong characters who can take charge of their fate and so the audience is served extensively. I developed my story from the view of the ordinary guy, his knowledge and culture of that time, and not…

nicholasandrewhalls Good points. Let's see I can spark.

For the past 70 years, WWII has been sanitized and romanticized almost beyond recognition by "the sentimental, the loony patriotic, the ignorant, and the bloodthirsty." False Flags is drama of course, but seen through the eyes of a young peasant…

Thank you for your comment, appreciated. I could explain more about the screenplay but that would be wrong, the reader sees the logline first. Indeed it must be clear and entice. You say "to survive" is too vague. Don't you…

Europa , Europa, the story of Solomon Perel has a similar issue but is still quite another drama. Solomon Perel must hide his Jewish identity. My father was known as booty Pole.? so enemies on both sides.? refers to the…

In wartime the goal and stakes are survival. The antagonist is of course Nazi Germany.

The reader will not see the conflict. Reason for me to emphasize with "twist of fate."

Yes well said. He just turned 18. Here my old wix pages http://fjwohlert.wix.com/swastika. The swastika approach was too controversial and not appreciated.

Yes I agree, it doesn't flow and the meaning of the word "blitzed" is different in UK english. There is no need to add "after enemy planes blitzed his beloved Poland mercilessly.? I hope to believe it's a well-known fact…