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I'm not 100% happy with this but here goes:
"When an agoraphobic music student meets his soulmate and discovers she?is a pop diva, he decides to?face his fears by working at the hottest concert venue in town."
Hello date movie.
I've made him a music student. The pop diva seeks him out because he writes hauntingly beautiful melodies. They spark a romance and he tries to change for her by getting a job at the hottest concert hall?in town.
Maybe they can sing a duet on stage together in front of a huge crowd for the final scene. Maybe he can only sing on stage with a blindfold on and the song is called "Love is Blind" or something cheesy like that.
And I don't know how to change the font size, sorry! S
What is it that you really, really want to explore in the story? ?Agoraphobia? ?Or is agoraphobia intended as a dramatic device to complicate the romantic relationship?
I can see stuff. But the last bit doesn't fit into the story. Is that a major issue. Is the relationship real?
Remove the words pop star and replace them with vampire it makes no difference because you have said how her job impacts on the story.
I can see what I'd write in a script based on this. But it's your script. What are you writing?