When a young Midwest psychic with a secret loses her supernatural gifts, instinct leads Crystal True to snowbird country where she uncovers the family she always dreamed of having.

How does she know that it is her instinct leading her and not her psychic ability? Maybe something else or someone else's psychic ability can lead her.

Hi, switching out Crystal True with "her" will make this read better. I don't know what snowbird country is...perhaps switch this out to something any reader will be able to grasp and visualize instantly.

Good luck

Midwest: With a Secret: Crystal True: Snowbird country: Always dreamed of having. These are things that can be left out of the logline.

"When a young psychic loses her supernatural gifts, she uses instinct to uncover her family."

of course now we have to build it back up because it makes no sense.
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"When an orphan loses her psychic abilities, She must rely on natural instincts to search for her long lost family while one step ahead of a controlling and abusive foster father."
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!

If it's a comedy, a "casserole killer" would make an great character type.

But I am unable to figure out the causal relationship between the inciting incident, "losing her supernatural powers" and "uncovering the family she has always dreamed of". This doesn't tell me what her objective goal is.

And what are the stakes? What does she stand to lose if she fails?

Understood. Okay, revising now. Many thanks.

When a young psychic with a secret loses her supernatural gifts, instinct leads Crystal True to snowbird country where she uncovers modern-day bootlegging with a twist, a casserole killer and the family she always dreamed of having."

Why would someone want to kill a casserole?

She dreamed of having a family of bootleggers with one of them a killer of casseroles?