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A woman receives a text from her child who died ten years earlier she must ..... to prove they are still alive.
The .... is the story. Embark on a voyage, undertake an investigation, start a search with the help of her ex-lover. Whatever your story entails.
So if the child hasn?t aged this is a supernatural thriller which makes the logline a little different.
She has to prove it is not only an illusion, but also that it is not a hoax, a cruel prank by someone who knew her son, a friend of the boy, or a relative.
But she saw her child when she was in the train and he was outside train Station with unknown girl and after the train started to go....?
I like the premise. It has an air of mystery, yet at the same time, has the potential for a lot of heart.
I agree with Variable, and will add that it would greatly help if the scope of the challenge was made clear.
For example, the movie Lion presented a slightly similar situation, boy wants to find his mum but at the same time, he had to look for her in India. With 1 billion people to search through the size of his task made his challenge clear and his obstacle huge.
What would be the equivalent for this mother? Could the child have been lost, or presumed dead, in China?
Grammatical errors aside, you have stated the vehicle (text msgs) that are a different spin on the story (that's good) but beyond that, what else? must the woman overcome to reunite with her child? Surely, she will not spend 2 hrs asking questions through texts?