5 reviews
Agreed with all the above ?comments.
Also I can't explain why, but the premise tickled?my?funny?bone and conjured up a 4 Weddings and a Funeral angle in my mind. Have you considered making this a comedy?
So the android and the groom team up? Why does the android help him? He's clearly not dangerous so why is he there. This is a good first act but flesh it out and add a clear goal and obstacles.
So the android and the groom team up? Why does the android help him? He's clearly not dangerous so why is he there. This is a good first act but flesh it out and add a clear goal and obstacles.