When a groom-to-be discovers his identical twin has been replaced by an android, they must partner up to investigate his wedding party and find those responsible for the decoy.

5 reviews

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

Agreed with all the above ?comments.

Also I can't explain why, but the premise tickled?my?funny?bone and conjured up a 4 Weddings and a Funeral angle in my mind. Have you considered making this a comedy?

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

So the android and the groom team up? Why does the android help him? He's clearly not dangerous so why is he there. This is a good first act but flesh it out and add a clear goal and obstacles.

Karel Segers Mentor · 5,100 pts

So the android and the groom team up? Why does the android help him? He's clearly not dangerous so why is he there. This is a good first act but flesh it out and add a clear goal and obstacles.