A young man named Abdelhafid who suffers from personality disorder starts a show where he will go on exposing a woman who cheated on her husband , but after one of his personalities expose the case , another personality takes over and starts its own show where they expose the other shows

5 reviews

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

If your goal is to comment on how cheap run-of-the-mill reality shows exploit people, I believe the premise needs work.

As the others have noted, the plot is unclear and the concept vague. However the subject matter can be interesting, try to distill your character and actions down to a clear goal and motivation combo.

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

What? This literally made no sense to me! You changed the story halfway through for no reason -- what other shows? Why is he even doing the first show about the cheating women? Is it only about cheating women or men too? And the hell type of producer would give this guy a show like that?

Karel Segers Mentor · 5,100 pts

What? This literally made no sense to me! You changed the story halfway through for no reason -- what other shows? Why is he even doing the first show about the cheating women? Is it only about cheating women or men too? And the hell type of producer would give this guy a show like that?