When a bad boy movie star agrees to a blind date, he ends up with his biggest fan – a struggling single mom, whom he falls for.
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5 reviews
Where is the conflict?
And what are the stakes?
I love this concept! The logline is okay, but I feel like there is something missing.
I would add a twist as a midpoint reversal to change the direction of the story. I think there is too little conflict in the logline right now or maybe it is not visible. What are they going to do as a couple after they fall in love? What is standing in their way?
Can Jason Statham fall for a single mom? Sure, but I feel we are getting sucked into the Hallmark channel??.
Breaking it down:
- Why now? Why are these two different worlds together? How about she wins a meet & greet contest with said bad boy movie star
- Who is she? She is a chill single mom Yoga instructor
- Where is the rub/conflict? He botches the meet and greets
After botching a meet and greet with his biggest fan ? a single mom Yogi, a bad boy movie star must turn his hectic life around to find inner peace and true love.