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When his breakthrough idea got stolen,an aspiring TV writer must fight to keep both his job and sanity.
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When his cartoon idea is stolen and it becomes a huge hit, a bankrupt TV writer fights to maintain his property and sanity after he hires a wacky pro bono lawyer to sue the network
What, in practical terms, manifests him keeping his job and sanity? This would be his goal and needs to be specified in the logline. More so, how he fights to do so is his action and also needs to be described.
Without these descriptions the plot is vague, and story unclear so best to re draft with the action and goal.