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I see that you posted a lot of loglines lately. Let me just tell you that I also focused on too much loglines at once a few months ago and simply couldn't get anything done in the end. I learned that you have to set priorities when you want to be successful in any kind of creative work.
So, as Nir already posted, pick one or two logline ideas and focus on them. One step at a time, and you will see results coming in.
Good luck!
It's hard to tell if your posts are genuine requests for help with concepts and loglines or not, simply as the number of them indicates that you're working on as many scripts. I suggest you use this forum to focus on one or two concepts at a time, get comments then implement them and improve with each attempt.
As with your other posts, this one lacks the story critical elements a logline needs. It would be best for you to check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more information.
Laughingfire,
You need to familiarize yourself with the rules of this page and the story structure of the logline found here:
Good luck.