The streets made him, the Army changed him, and life forced him back into a world he left behind and taught him how to let go of the past.
In My Hood
4 reviews
The logline needs to tell who the main character is, what his/her goal is, and what obstacles are in his/her path. Good Luck!
Sounds interesting but you need to develop on
1. Character (one word description)
2.Goal
3.whats restricting this goal
Yep. It's a tagline, not a logline. It doesn't tell me anything about the story.
Cool as a tagline on a poster... Not cool as a logline. The logline should essentially tells us exactly what this film is about. WHO is this guy, and WHAT does he HAVE to do?
Anyway -- good luck.