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In Days when Corona Virus kills humans and community divides to numerous radical ideas, A guilty – feeling boy discovers spiritual and surreal signs, which leads him to enter an alternate world to find his lost sister after his third failed suicide attempts.
The boy comes off as a weak character, driven by circumstances, "spiritual and surreal signs".
The job a *pro*tagonist is to be *pro*active, to sit in the driver's seat steering the plot, not riding along in the passenger seat in a plot vehicle steered by others or by circumstances.
Joker2008, check out the "Formula" link in the header "https://staging.loglineit.com/howto/" on how to construct your login in a manner that the community and I can help.
Sounds interesting, please reply with your updated logline.
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