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Saying the lead is an American exchange student, and then saying he is studying abroad, is redundant.
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When an American exchange student in Tokyo discovers he's become host to a fox spirit, he must... (Then tell us what he must do)
The logline sets up a situation, but portrays the main character as a passive victim --"he has become host to a fox spirit".?
After the exchange student realizes he's?become a host, what does he do about it?? What must he do?? What?becomes his objective goal?