3 reviews
Character names shouldn't be in loglines. Their names are irrelevant for a logline
You spend to much time on back story as a result the logline is way too long.
"When he discovers his crazy grandfather's treasure map in his attic, a suicidal fisherman blindly follows the map in the hope of saving his crawdad business, but must battle a brutal but famous treasure hunter for the spoils."
A little to much character background. Why does he think the treasure will save everything? Is there anything that he needs the money to solve, other than just being poor.
During a suicide attempt a man that lost everything in hurricane katrina finds the treasure map of Jean Lafitte which triggers a hunt to change his life.