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It sounds like the deforestation was the inciting incident, therefore, according to the 'Formula' tab (please check it out as it will help you) the logline could be:
After her home is destroyed by deforestation, a wildcat must protect her younger brothers in a hostile world.
This is a good start, but as stated in the 'Formula' tab, a logline needs to define a clear goal for the main character.
What is the wildcat's end game? Survival is an ongoing effort with seemingly no end in sight, what achievement will beyond a doubt signify that she has achieved safety for her brothers?
Thank you all for taking the time to write. After reading your comments, my logline would be:
"A caring orphaned wildcat has to leave her home destroyed by wood cutters and protect her brothers while struggling to survive in a hostile world."
The above members were very kind in reading your very long post and responding with their thoughts.
Here is a different type of kindness; You NEED to learn to logline your own concepts... give it a try I'm sure you'll see you can do it.
Once you've posted a logline of some sort,? you'll get far more productive responses that will actually help you.
Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for a helpful starting point.
All the best.