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Part of the municipal park was deforested. The wild cat Mitzi, remaining orphaned with her brothers, has to leave her home destroyed by wood cutters. She reaches the Big Park Reservation (Rodnei Mountains National Park), where she finds shelter in the abandoned cottage of the forester. It’s Christmas Eve and the inhabitants of the Big Park are preparing for the celebration. Mitzi and her brothers are having trouble even here, being disturbed by the bad guys: Kit-Bandit and Max-Mask. They dress up in wolves in order to scare them away from the reservation. Their true identity is discovered by the wild cat Stripy and his friends. The scheme is foiled and to Mitzi and her brothers are offered a better life, proof that their guardian angel has not left them in trouble…
Thank you all for taking the time to write. After reading your comments, my logline would be:"A caring orphaned wildcat has to leave her home destroyed by wood cutters and protect her brothers while struggling to survive in a hostile…
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Part of the municipal park was deforested. The wild cat Mitzi, remaining orphaned with her brothers, has to leave her home destroyed by wood cutters. She reaches the Big Park Reservation (Rodnei Mountains National Park), where she finds shelter in the abandoned cottage of the forester. It’s Christmas Eve and the inhabitants of the Big Park are preparing for the celebration. Mitzi and her brothers are having trouble even here, being disturbed by the bad guys: Kit-Bandit and Max-Mask. They dress up in wolves in order to scare them away from the reservation. Their true identity is discovered by the wild cat Stripy and his friends. The scheme is foiled and to Mitzi and her brothers are offered a better life, proof that their guardian angel has not left them in trouble…
I need a logline for the above synopsis. Please do help with input.
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When a meltdown started accidentally by a butter sandwich opens a time vortex in a lonely computer geek?s house, he and two previous inhabitants thrown in the present by the vortex, must save the planet from an alien warrior race who thinks humans are unfit to handle time travel.
New logline idea: A butter sandwich opens a time vortex in a lonely computer geek's house, signaling the human presence in the universe. With the help of two previous inhabitants who were thrown in the present by the vortex, he…
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An anomaly opens a portal which brings three people from different time periods under one roof to deal with the alien race that monitors the universe for inferior race development.
Thank you all for the feedback. I'll rewrite the logline?using the advice received and I will post it again.
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An anomaly opens a portal which brings three people from different time periods under one roof to deal with the alien race that monitors the universe for inferior race development.
Below is the longer version: An anomaly caused by a butter sandwich melting the nuclear fission core of a testing facility disrupts the lives of two young men and teleports them in the newly acquired old house that belongs to…
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an incurious uber driver wants to go home finds that his final pickup is a young terrorist with a ticking time bomb. so he use his skills to deliver him before it explodes.
My dark comedy take on this logline: an incurious uber driver wants to go home finds that his final pickup is a young terrorist with a ticking time bomb. so he drives his car to the bank that took his…
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When, after being revived from a near drowning, a devout little girl is plagued by nightly visits from an evil dwarf-like creature, (22) her two disbelieving teen brothers must convince their terrified, and missing, African housekeeper to help them find a way to banish it. (44)
My ?take on the logline: After being revived from drowning, a devout little girl is plagued by nightly visits from an evil dwarf-like creature. In order to banish the creature, her two disbelieving twin brothers and the African housekeeper undergo…
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In order to get close to her only son, a recently divorced mother must face accusations with the arrival of a mysterious lever.
Do you mean "mysterious ?lawyer"?
