During WW2, team of monsters led by Annabell Van Helsing must stop a group of Occult Nazis from resurrecting Dracula.

Ministry of Occult Warfare

3 reviews

jde Penpusher · 40 pts

What purpose would Dracula serve the Nazis? Also what is the tone of your screenplay?

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

"must stop a group of occult Nazis" -- or else what?

The stakes: What's the big deal about resurrecting Dracula when there are already so many villains rampaging through Europe?

Andrew Bates Penpusher · 270 pts

(has a "league of extraordinary gentlemen" feel to it)

Names and age are usually irrelevant in loglines. I'm in two minds about mentioning the name as not many people will be privy to the relationship between the name "Van Helsing and Dracula".
But in saying that, it is relevant to the story.

What is the protagonist flaw? (a personal obstacle to over come? The weight of Van Helsing name?
Is she a monster herself?