After escaping from a galactic penal colony, seven prisoners find their bid for freedom has turned into a battle for their survival when they must outwit and out manoeuvre a psychopathic android with holographic, shape shifting abilities intent on re-enacting the twisted deaths he has watched in old horror movies.

Thanks Tony.Funny you should mention Marvin, he kept messing with my head while I was tryng to write this. The do actaully have to dock with the other ship becuse of lack of fuel to get any further. I will keep workingon both the logline ans the script. Thank you once again for taking the time to help it is very much appreciated. lois...

Thanks Tony.Funny you should mention Marvin, he kept messing with my head while I was tryng to write this. The do actaully have to dock with the other ship becuse of lack of fuel to get any further. I will keep workingon both the logline ans the script. Thank you once again for taking the time to help it is very much appreciated. lois...

Hi Lois,

This has some definite potential for a cool horror comedy IMO... You're probably just shooting for sci-fi horror, but for some reason I can't get the thought of Marvin from The Hitch Hikers Guide going homocidal out of my head : /

The issue with it, for me, is that it gives the impression that the main action is a chase... If it was contained in an area it would be a lot scarier. I'm no Blake Snyder zealot, but his take on genre is masterful. He breaks horror down into what he calls Monster In The House; the hero et'al must be in a place from which there is no escape... Even in horror flicks that take place outdoors, or in your case outer space, there are lots of examples where this is the case: Alien, The Blair Wich Project, Jaws, 2001 A Space Odessy...even Spielberg's early Duel... If they escaped the prison colony and crashed on a moon where there was some kind of deserted base etc etc etc.... But that would just be my spin.

Regardless, I see potential ... The hook is killer. Best of luck.