A young man cursed by the blood of pirates that flows within him , promises his dying sister to find the famous treasure left by his father ”The lord of the oceans”.

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Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

How does the curse connect to the treasure? can only pirates ancestors find it? Is it an obstacle or does it help him in his quest? I am?very confused by this "pirate's blood" and it's significance or relevance to the story.

Karel Segers Mentor · 5,093 pts

How does the curse connect to the treasure? can only pirates ancestors find it? Is it an obstacle or does it help him in his quest? I am?very confused by this "pirate's blood" and it's significance or relevance to the story.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

What does "Cursed by the blood of pirates" mean?

Since the curse is an important part of the logline, I would work on helping the reader understand what it means.