A woman decides to sabotage her best friend’s wedding when she realizes her former fiance is proposing to her.

Wedding,Love and Other Drugs

6 reviews

clloyd8 Penpusher · 51 pts

If it is her best friend, wouldn't she know that she is dating her ex-fiance? ?If this is the fiance quickly deciding to marry the friend instead of the protagonist, I think it needs to be more clear. Funny concept though!

JinniaFlyer450 Penpusher · 216 pts

Agreed with most of the above; I understand that the first "her" is the woman and the second "her" is the best friend, but it needs to be made more obvious.

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

You've got everything here it just needs a little tweaking, so i'll attempt a rewrite with my own spin:

A woman decides to sabotage a wedding when she?receives?two letters in the same day: a divorce notice and an invitation to the wedding of her best friend and?soon to be ex-husband.