Hi Bomarc
I found this draft of the logline confusing. I understand what your trying to do with focusing on "...the situation..." but in my mind this is the wrong approach for a logline.
In my opinion good loglines start with;
when a something happens to a someone that is of this description, they have to do this...
or
when a someone of this description has this thing happen to them they have to do this...
This draft has;
when a someone (MC) of this description (super hero) and this description (amnesiac) after that thing (accident) during that other thing (on a mission) has this thing happen to them (become a patient of a shrink) with this description (personality disorder) for this reason (retrieve her memory) description of the world (not safe place).
In short this logline doesn't describe a story rather elements in the plot and setting. Karel Segers has a good little formula that helps with the basic structure of a logline here it is:
When a {major event} happens {the MC} must {do the main action} and learn to {over come the flaw}.
If the way they overcome the flaw is significant then add that into the logline as well.