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A materialistic real estate agent must convince the ghost of his deceased controlling mother to let him sell the old family house to a yoga teacher he loves.

October 19, 2014
A young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.

September 12, 2014

on A young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.

Wow great advice thanks! This time, I wanted to try something completely different. No focus on the back story neither on the whole plot. Just the situation of a super hero who can't remember she's one and the shrink that…
on Abducted as a small child, a college athlete's sadistic mother threatens his championship hopes when he sets out to find his long-lost dad.

Would'nt it be interesting to give us a glimpse of why this discovery jeopardize his dream of succeeding as an athlete? And still I think you could nail a better adjective for your MC. Or as dpg putted it, stick…
on A young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.

Yes she does retain her super power. But she can't control them anymore. Therefore when one of them shows up instinctively, it create a humorous situation and serve as a piece of the puzzle to discover that she is not…
on A pathological liar is subpoenaed to testify in a murder trial against his only friend.

You got some really good inputs from everybody but your logline sure trigger my imagination. Keep working on it!
on On a quest to find his long-lost father, a godly athlete struggles for answers when he discovers his fugitive mother abducted him as a small child. Tagline: Basketball was just a game; finding out the truth became his goal.

Great comment from Nir... And what if you would just change the quest for something like : " seek to find why is fugitive mother abducted him as a small child"
on A young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.

By the way, sorry if my english is not perfect but I write this show in french...
on A young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.

Would really like your input on this one. It's a web series I'm developing. Although I think I got all the good ingredients its seems a little long for a logline. -a protagonist and antagonist -a personal and a universal…