A once successful landowner with picture perfect family, suddenly finds himself at the mercy of his arch-rival, forcing him to juggle single fatherhood with reclaiming his livelihood and dignity.

5 reviews

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

As the others have said. ?I don't understand it either in terms of plot and stakes.

FFF Mentor · 7,850 pts

I personally don't understand this logline.

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

Agreed with the above comments, the logline fails to describe a plot.

Check out the Training tab on the top bar for more detail on how best to construct a logline with all the necessary elements.