A once academically gifted young man is intent on getting his life back on track. One night while driving home, he?s nearly killed in an accident and falls for the woman who saves him, but her lies and past horror may destroy everything.

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6 reviews

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Giving the story away is exactly the purpose of a logline -- not the ending, but the story.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

Hey hey, I noticed, in the first sentence you give the lead a goal, (Getting his life back on track) then your second sentence doesn't relate to that goal at all. The logline seems disjointed as a result.

There are some good elements here and with a little twerking (OK tweaking but that's not as fun :) you could end up with a solid logline

Hope that helped, good luck with this!