A Google assistant narrates the story of a dysfunctional family going through a messy divorce after the father?committed infidelity.

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giannisggeorgiou Mentor · 4,754 pts

I agree with the previous comments.

It sounds like they're kind of story, where there is a second story and within the first one, and the main character is the listener of the second story. Then, we get into a cut between the two stories, where there is a second character, the protagonist of the second story, etc. etc.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

You have told us who the narrator is, but who is the lead character?

CraigDGriffiths Singularity · 20,463 pts

This is a nice way of telling a story. It is perhaps even a pitch. But what is the story?

Traditionally there is something to achieve and the things in the way. ?You have describe a nice hook for a film, not a story.

What makes it messy? That is the story.