A gambling drug addict, struggles to reunite with his family while escaping an iconic resort’s sinister nightman with pious motives.

Hotel California

7 reviews

10PTT-COM Penpusher · 90 pts

"On an island resort, a gambling drug addict searches for his family while pursued by a sinister nightman who punishes sinners."

- Interesting to contemplate if the protag is a gambling drug addict or a drug-addict gambler. Kind of a chicken-and-egg situation. Did the gambling lead to drugs or the drugs to gambling? [Ah, I see you answered this in a comment, favila.]

- Wasn't sure what kind of resort you intended. Anything with enough isolation will do.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

In the end, the night man is probably the lead character, (A hallucination) the lead just doesn't know it because he is a prisoner of his own devise.

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

I get the reference to the lyrics of the "Hotel California" by the Eagles:

"Relax, " said the night man,
"We are programmed to receive.
You can check-out any time you like,
But you can never leave! "

But I am unable to get a handle on the fabulist world of your concept. And I find the psychology that you give to explain his addictive behavior puzzling.

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Does the night man have something to do with his drug addition? Is he the BOSS. Maybe just reversing the text may help. ' While struggling to reunite with his family a gambling drug addict etc....'.

Alan Smithee Penpusher · 20 pts

Does the night man have something to do with his drug addition? Is he the BOSS. Maybe just reversing the text may help. ' While struggling to reunite with his family a gambling drug addict etc....'.

favila 0 pts

The guests are punished for their sins by the night man via the command of God. The addict is the only one who yearns for freedom, the others are content. Mourning the loss of his father, with whom they bonded over gambling, turned to drugs instead of his loving family for comfort.