A filmmaker struggles to hire an aging porn actress to star in his next pornographic sci-fi movie.

Not sure I understand, If Porn is easy money, why does he need to kidnap the pornstar for money? As Rutger says, why not hire her and make the easy money?

The logline is written so that the kidnapping filmmaker is the lead character. That is an interesting choice.

1) He wants to hold her ransom.
2) He wants to make porn because of easy money.
3) It takes place in America.

Why does he kidnap her? Why not simply hire her? Why does he want to make porn? Easy money? And don't forget the Inciting incident and where your story takes place; Amerika, Europe, Tajikistan...

What do you think of the logline?

Never new that was the real reason Choi Eun-Hee was obducted for the greater glory of North Korea. Has potential!. Although a sortlike comedy came ourmt not to long ago