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• on A race car driver who comes out of retirement signs up for a televised deadly game show with another driver who hates him.

  I revised it.

• on A race car driver who comes out of retirement signs up for a televised deadly game show with another driver who hates him.

  Okay. What does that mean?

• on A chef discovers that her husband is in an affair with one of her co-workers.

  1) She's a head chef. 2) She's from Ethiopia. 3) He's good at baking. 4) He's not famous.

• on Two disgruntled young women who works at a secret organized police department find themselves in a drug ring by a kingpin who is targeted by a hitman.

  I’m sorry. This isn’t no plain action romantic comedy.

• on After getting a stuffed yak as a birthday present, a young Tibetan girl discovers that it turns into a real one.

  1) She is from either Bhutan or Nepal. 2) She is shy. 3) She must protect him from being hurt.

• on A babysitter gets prank calls from a mysterious caller gets in a home invasion happens to be an child abductor who abused her in her childhood.

  She wants to save a new victim.

• on A babysitter gets prank calls from a mysterious caller gets in a home invasion happens to be an child abductor who abused her in her childhood.

  A babysitter tracks down a mysterious man who pranks calls her abused in her childhood.

• on A con artist does one more scam before he retires exposes dark secrets in his family well after his father dies unexpectedly.

  1) It’s not a scam. 2) He’s been a con artist even before he died. He also pay for his funeral costs which he didn’t want to. 3) He and his siblings was abused by his father and deserve to…

• on A young couple discovers a mysterious toy box that kills anyone who makes a wish.

  Yes. There is.

• on A young woman decides to not to listen to her father’s advice and follows her footsteps in fighting crime.

  Yes. He is.

• on A woman decides to record events of her friend’s sexual relationship with her deaf mute younger sister.

  1) She discovers he is having an affair with her. 2) She decides on wanting to take him back. 3) She is tracking her sister her every move. 4) She uses a camcorder. 5) Her sister having a fight.

• on A occult detective finds herself in a world of supernatural beings in dystopian America.

  1) I meant a detective who investigates occult cases. 2) The world is post apocalyptic. 3) She encounters them.

• on A Japanese American young woman discovers deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly.

  I think she must try to escape herself from being killled.

• on A Japanese American young woman discovers deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly.

  She learns things about her past.

• on An divorced actor decides to reconnect with his daughter after she becomes famous in her own right.

  She wants to be one like her dad who was both an multitalented actor and musician.

• on An divorced actor decides to reconnect with his daughter after she becomes famous in her own right.

  1) He abandoned her and left her with her mother. 2) For her money. 3) He wants to.

• on An wanderer and a space princess must stop an evil emperor from having their town by ecologists in order to protect the environment.

  So. What the logline be?

• on An wanderer and a space princess must stop an evil emperor from having their town by ecologists in order to protect the environment.

  It’s my own original story.

• on A woman transforms into her younger self as she becomes a detective teaming up with a dog.

  She is trapped in a child’s body.

• on A free spirited young woman who likes to be barefoot tries to develop with a relationship with a middle aged man in his car.

  Her goal is to take his cash. The dilemma is her feet.