A doubtful artist and a stagnant fashion designer confront their own shortcomings when that spark an unlikely friendship

TITLE: The Road from Melancholy to Passion

2 reviews

Odie Samurai · 2,208 pts

I wouldn’t consider the duo an unlikely friendship, both being creatives. From your title, you’ve covered the melancholy. Where is the road to passion, aka goal?

Keep going.

Alan H. Jordan Penpusher · 43 pts

There doesn't seem to be much much conflict here. Two insecure people met and strike up a friendship.So what? What are they seeking? What do they have to lose? If I know these things, maybe I'll care.